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David and Goliath
Kelsey Nicole Webb


Long ago there was a young boy called David who seven older brothers. David's brothers were to big and strong. They had work to do and they didn't have time for their little brother. David sometimes felt small and unimportant. "I Wish I was big and strong, to'' he sighed . "Then I could help"

One day , David's father gave him a job of his own.

"I need a shepard to care of my sheep '' he told him. ,, "you must lead them to to food and water . You must scare the wild animals with this sling and stones. And you must count the sheep every day to make sure they are all safe!"

David was very excited to be given such an important job.He told God all about it. It will be hard work he told God but I know you will be there to help me. David spoke to God every day, asking questions and learning from Him. Of course, It was very quiet up in the hills, with just the sheep for company sometimes. David didn't see another person all day . But whenever he felt lonely, David got out his harp and made up songs , to remind him self that God was near. He kept busy doing target practice with his sling.

Soon he never missed a target, ping with just one stone, David could scare away even the fiercest lions and wolves! While David was learning to be a good shepherd , his three biggest brother had joined the Israelite army, led by King Saul. The Israelite army Were away fighting the of the Philistines. But they weren't doing very well.The Philistine army had a secret weapon - a giant solider called Goliath. Goliath was much taller than the other men. He the longest spear the Israelites had ever seen. He was strong as bear ,as fierce as a wolf and as brave as a lion. One morning David's farther sent him to take food to his brothers. and what a surprise he got when he arrived Goliath was in the middle of the battle his spear at the Israelites. "Listen!" he roared "send your best solider to fight me. If he wins we will be your slaves. If I win, you be ours."

And so they did they and they sent David with his sling and and got his sling out aimed at Goliath and he was dead and David won the battle. They cheered for David and that's the end of the story.

the end.




Another great story from Bethan (11)

Water + Jesus = Wine!

Bethan has written the story from the view of a helper at the wedding on the day Jesus performed his first miracle.

Based on John 2:1-12

It was the day of the wedding. No, we weren't invited, Mum was working there and I had to help out pouring the wine. Yuk! If I were rich, I would go to loads of weddings, but no-one wanted us around. The wedding was a big one. I had to squeeze past every one AND hold a big jar of wine! It was terrible. Then, the jar started to slip out of my hand. Everything seemed to go out of control! But then, a man came up, he caught the jar just in time. He gave me a wonderful smile, and he had a shine in his brown eyes. Something was different with that man than with any other that I had seen. He seemed so perfect!

"Thank you..." I said, not quite knowing what to say. If he knew who I was, he wouldn't want to be friends with me. But then he said something that totally shocked me.

"You're welcome, Sarah." How did he know my name? I wish I could have asked, but mam shouted from across the room that I should be filling cups.

It was about half way through the wedding, and already I was tired. I didn't know how I would survive the other half. suddenly, there was a cry from the other side of the room. "Oh no! With the wine ran out, the wedding will end early!" I looked into the kitchen, the bride was right, there was no wine left! I should have been happy, but instead I felt sorry for her, for everyone!

I saw a lady whisper into a man's ear something like: "It is time, Jesus..." Then I realised this 'Jesus man' was the man I saw earlier. Time for what though? What could he do? Mary (the lady) turned to me and said "Do what he tells you, ok?"

I nodded, and Jesus told me to get 6 jars of water. And, guess what? He turned them into wine!

For the next few weeks, no one could stop talking about it! I later found out that Jesus was God, and became a Christian. Now, i'm God's best friend.

THE END

 

Another great story from Bethan (11)

Ruth and Naomi

Based on the book of Ruth

Ruth finished washing up and sat down. Naomi came into the room and sat down next to Ruth.

"Oh Naomi, tell me the story again, you know, the one about the..." Naomi smiled. She always knew what story Ruth wanted to listen to.

"Me and my husband, your husband and Orpha's husband, lived in Bethlehem. There was terrible famine there so we came here. You and Orpha got married to my sons, but then..." This part of the story tears always came into Naomi's eyes. "My husband died, The End."

Ruth felt sorry for Naomi. "Naomi, tell me about your land and your God, please?" Ruth loved listening to Naomi talk about her God. The God who made everyone and everything. But one day Naomi was sad when her sons died too.

"Ruth and Orpha, I'm going back to Bethlehem and you shall come with me." Ruth and Orpha came with Naomi for a little while, but then Naomi turned round. "You to go home! You two don't want to come with me, you go home!"

Orpha went home, but Ruth refused to go and went to Bethlehem with Naomi. They were poor there, so Ruth went everyday to the wheat fields and gathered leftovers, like the poor people did. Boaz, the owner of the wheat field and a relative of Ruth, loved Ruth and so went to another relative.

"Please sir, if you would like to marry Ruth then you shall, but if not I shall marry her!" The relative let Boaz marry Ruth, they had two kids and their kids, kids, kids and so on became the family of Jesus. And everyone lived happily ever after!!!


THE END

Another great story from Bethan (11)

Daniel and the Lions Den

Based on Daniel 6

A long time ago, in a land far far away. There lived a boy called David. When he was still a boy, he and his friends were taken to an even further away land called Babylon. Daniel didn't want to be there, but never stopped believing in God.

The king decided to make Daniel and his friends his wise men because they were very wise and handsome. The other wise men were jealous because the king liked Daniel more than any of them. So, they decided to do something about it. One day, they went up to the king and said. "Your the best, King Darius!" They said to the king. The king was very pleased. "But some people don't know that..." The king was horrified! "What?!? People don't know that I am the best? Then we must do something about it!" So, the wise men tricked Darius into signing a piece of paper saying that anyone who doesn't come to Darius for help, will be thrown into the lions den!

When Daniel saw this new law he was sad. He wanted to ask God for help, not Darius! but he didn't want to go into the lions den.

Hmm, that IS a hard decision!

After a bit of thinking he decided he would ask God for things, not Darius! One day when he was praying, the wise men saw him and turned him in. King Darius had no choice, but to throw Daniel into the lions den. He didn't want to because Daniel was his best wise man! But the law could not be changed. All night while Daniel was in the den, King Darius was worried!

In the morning, the king rushed of to the den and saw that Daniel was unharmed! "God sent an angel to shut the lions mouths. I am safe!" The king was so pleased he immediately changed the law so that everyone should ask God for anything! And, he put the bad wise men in to the lions den!

This story helps us to know that we should always do things God's way, even though it might get us into trouble.

THE END


This story was sent in 11th November

Congratulations to Phoebe aged 9 for this story

Jesus and the deciples

My Bible story: Jesus was walking across the hills with his deciples. Suddenly Jesus saw millions of people. He himself knew they were really hungry so he shared 5 fish and 20 loafs of bread with them and everyone was happy!

Thanks Phoebe hope it's the first of many. If you want to read the original version check out John 6:1-14.


This is the first story sent in by a"Great Bible Story" visitor

Congratulations to Bethan aged 10 for this story

Bethan is from UK but is currently living in Latvia with her family!

Bethan has chosen an unusually story from the Bible that she thought you may not have heard before.

A BIG decision!

King Solomon was the son of King David. King solomon was very wise and ruled over the people very wisely. People asked King Solomon to help them when they needed help and Solomon always had a wise answer.

One day two women came up to Solomon. The first woman said: "We both live in the same house and at the same time we had a baby each. Last night she rolled over her baby and it died. So she swapped her baby with mine and pretended it was hers. In the morning I woke up and found a dead baby beside me, but when I looked at it carefully I saw it was her baby, but she says it's mine!"

Then the second woman said: "No your wrong! Your baby died and mine is still alive!"

Solomon thought about this and then said to cut the baby in half so they could have half each!

The false mother said: "OK! Then it would be fair!" But the real mother said: "Please don't kill my baby! Give it to her, but please don't kill my baby!"

Now Solomon knew who the real mother was and the real mother got her baby back!

Taken from a story in the Bible in I King 3:16-28

 

This a great Christmas Story from Bethan (Age 11)
The Shepherds visit Jesus

I listened to the conversation going to and fro across the table.
"The star! It's so big! Have you seen it?" One said.
"Yes, it's amazing!"
"OK everyone! Enough to eat, time to go back to the fields!"
This Shepherding stuff is hard work! We've only had 5 minutes rest and now we have to go back to the fields! And it's getting dark, but I have to do it now that father is ill and mum is looking after baby Sarah.
"Come on Peter! Stop day-dreaming and follow us to the fields!"
I followed John, Simon, Paul and Mathew up the hill to look after the sheep. After an hour of looking after the sheep I decided it wouldn't hurt to sit on a rock and rest for a minute.
Suddenly, the sky filled with light and I fell of the rock onto my face. I looked up and saw the light coming nearer. I ran to catch the sheep that were getting away, then i went and tried to comfort the shepherds, but they were so scared! I was very scared too, but then the light spoke.
"Do not be afraid, for I bring you good news! There is a baby king in Bethlehem. He is God's child. Go and see him! He will be lying in a manger!"
After she said this, a whole bunch of lights came and sang in the sky and then they disappeared. There was silence for a moment, but then John spoke up.
"Well...you heard what the angel said. Let's go!"
So it was an angel! I was so glad to have a rest. I was nervous and exited all at once. We took some sheep to give as presents. After a few minutes of searching, we finally found the manger. At last it was MY turn to see Jesus.
His cute face shone like a light and his smile was so cute! I knew that he is God's son, the light of the world!

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A Christmas Story from Scott (Age 6)
Nativity

Once there was a town called Nazareth. There were to people called Mary and Joseph. The king asked them if they could go to there home town to be taxed. They then went on a donkey to Bethel hem and then they went to the inns to try and find a place to stay for the night so mary could have her baby.

They could not find any room in the inns but there was a stable where Mary and Joseph could go and the special baby was born he was called Jesus.

That night the star of Bethel hem shone over the stable and the shepherds came to see the baby and an angel appeared over three kings who told them to go to Bethlehem to see the baby Jesus. They brought Jesus gifts of Gold, frankincense and Myrrh.


A Christmas Story sent in by Sinead aged 10
Well done Sinead for a great try!

What is your story based on: Birth of Jesus

Long, long ago about 2000 years ago there was a woman called Mary who was betroth to a carpenter called Joseph. One day God told Mary she was going to have her son and to have it in Bethlehem. God sent Gabriel to tell Joseph to call the baby Jesus. They started their journey as they new it would be long and hard. Mary road on a donkey as Joseph walked. They made the journey and the three wise men gave their gifts of gold, myrrh and frankincense to baby Jesus.



A Christmas Story sent in by Kofi aged 7
Well done Kofi for a great try!

The Nativity.
Once in a town called Nazareth lived 2 people named Mary and Joseph.

One day an angel came too see Mary. "A special baby must be born. God has chosen you to take care of him."(well you know what Joseph must of said)

So off they went on a long long journey. They went on a donkey to Bethlehem. When they got there all the inns were full. They went in.
The end